Friday, May 9, 2008

This is just to say

I ran across this poem recently, I really like it. Not only is it iconic, it’s brutal and hilarious.

This is just to say

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

-William Carlos Williams

And here are some I wrote in emulating the original.

This is just to say,
I just realized I never loved you.
I know you were saving your love for someone special
And you thought it was me

I was pretending those two years
Sorry if you’re hurt
I was lonely
And you are wealthy.

This is just to say,
I have been cleaning the toilet with your toothbrush
I realize you reserve it for your teeth only
but you drank my last beer

forgive me if you get a vicious mouth infection
the toilet now sparkles
you thanked me for cleaning it

3 comments:

Sir Georgio Loudbeard said...

this is just to say
I cut your hair while you were sleeping.
I know this might upset you
but I think you look nice

you were so proud of your stupid beard
you were so proud of your stupid afro
I gave you a sedative
I'll be long gone when you get up

Suzy said...

LOL I love yours and George's to!

Kev said...

This is just to say,
I rub dead fish and hawks on your face in your sleep.
You looked so peaceful in your slumber.
I did it just to say hi.

I know you miss me.
I know you'll forgive me.
But you now stink.
This should explain other peoples complaining of the stink as well.

...Not as good as yours and Georges, but I tried...